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Simple Ways to Write Stronger Introductions

Kaila Krayewski

Kaye Chang

4th June 2018

Introductions can be very tricky. Since it is the first portion of your article that the reader encounters, the stakes are high for it to be successful. A good introduction presents a broad overview and convince the reader that it is worth their time to read the rest of the piece.

A disorganized, boring, and error-filled introduction will create a negative impression whereas an engaging, concise, and well-written introduction will start your readers think highly of you and your article. Since it is the first thing that people will read, you want to make it count since you never get a second chance to make a first impression. It provides the readers with an initial impression of the argument, your writing style, and the overall quality of the work.

Take the time to craft a good introduction by following these steps.

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1. Start With an Attention Grabber

There are different ways to hook your reader from the start and grab the attentions of the readers. This is designed to bring them into your article, but not to tell the whole story.


Use an interesting fact or statistics to surprise your reader. While this should be relevant to what you are saying, this is not the place to state the fats that you are going to use for the body of your essay. You can use anecdotes, fun facts, quotes, questions or dialogues as a hook.


Your first sentence should pull the readers in, making them want to read the essay because they are intrigued or fascinated. Using a catchy saying or provocative statistics can be helpful, but you need to make sure that you don’t wander too far from the article’s purpose.


Start with Questions

The most preferred way to write introductions is to start with a question. By using a question to start your introduction, you are making utilizing of the element of curiosity and your readers won’t stop just at the introduction. They will start to read your article to the end to find the answer to the question you pose.

Example: Do you know that 80 percent of writers fail to use introductions in their articles?


Start with Facts

Everybody loves facts, especially if it can be proven. There are a lot of articles and a lot of them have completely worthless or impractical facts. People would be happy to read an article that is stating a fact and you are building their trust.

Example: Over 33.8% of American adults are obese, and the percentage of obese Americans has increased by at least 20% in 2010 alone.


Start with a Story

People enjoy reading stories because it is easy to relate to. A good story has a huge power to captivate the readers. You can use a personal or made up story as introduction to the article to get people to read along.

Example: Once upon a time, there was a guy named Maslow. He was into finding out what got people motivated and helped them reach the top of their fields.


Start with Humor

After a busy day at work or school or after reading through sad and devastating news, a better way to assimilate information is to introduce it with humour. Everybody appreciates some great humour, especially if it is used as an introduction to a great article.

Example: Some people will never be what they think they are. Lord help me be the person my dog thinks I am.


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2. Think About the Angle on Your Topic

If you are writing an introduction, you should know what your topic is and what you want to say about. A good introduction has an angle or way of presenting the information or argument to the readers. Think about what questions your article addresses and why they are important.

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3. Make an Outline

Making an outline for your introduction can be helpful, especially if there is a lot of information you need to present. An outline will let you know how your introduction can build up the steam for the readers.

After the hook sentence, you can provide some background information about the topic. Give anything that will help the reader have context for what you are going to discuss or any information about the topic that your readers will need to understand the argument. If you are writing a travel guide, it could be helpful to start with a brief information about the place.

For example: We’re located right on the main street in Samui, so there are options within mere seconds of walking. Plus, we’re often working on our laptops, and don’t want to venture too far out of range to get snacks.

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4. Keep Everything Short and Simple

Your introduction should give the necessary background about the topic, but it should not get too far into the specifics. A good rule of thumb is to write an introduction that is no longer than 10% of your article.

Introductions can make or break your article. It is worthy to think of the introduction carefully as It leads to your audience reading the entire content. If people don’t enjoy your introduction, they would not read your content, no matter how great it is.

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